First of all, I noticed a few grammatical errors but none of which is bad enough to affect the novel. The consistency of the chapters are just a bit bland but I've seen worse. I don't have much experience reading novels on this genre so I may be wrong, but regardless of the negatives, the positives are shown better. The details of their actions, even up to the point of each character's accent is definitely part of this novel's strong points, in other words, this novel has a personality.
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