Very nice. The story was quite marvelous in many aspects: the grammar is by far better than most of the novels on this site, Story progression is a bit slow to my taste but it is more than tolerable. In addition, the idea of making Harry more grey is simply brilliant. I think the updates are great in batch form; however, I know that it won't last, art can not be rushed, thus I will wait. In conclusion, this fan fiction is simply brilliant. Nevertheless, I suggest you wait off till more chapter releases, else the suspense will most likely kill you slowly and painfully.
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This is someone else's fanfiction. It is on fanfiction.net and it is called Harry Potter, Rise From Dust. I've read this story like 8 times and most recently last week. This guy obviously copied it because he even changed the name of the story - which shows he is trying to pass it off as his own story (people who have the writers permission always use the original title). He does NOT deserve your 5 stars. Bluezz-17 from fanfiction.net does. Read the story on fanfiction.net - but warning; it isn't completed and the last chapter was posted 6 years ago. Very annoying to see a story you like being stolen by someone who couldn't be arsed to write their own.
