I love the route where you are taking the story so far. The void storage/inventory is perfect and allows you to catch all the pokemon you want and not have to worry about putting them in the PC or switching them out. Another thing, I have read most of the other fanfics on this site and i can say yours is definitely up there (top 5/10 imo). Cant really complain, the battle scenes are not choppy and you can basically invision how they go, etc. Im guessing you are planning to introduce Red and Blue so that will also be very interesting. All in all i for one think that you have a great pokemon story and with your skills as a writor as well as the potential this story has, this could potentially be one of the best pokemon fanfics on this platform. Keep up the good work! đ
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