Review Detail of Zombie_Girl_2003 in Beg me for mercy!

I'm going to give this a three cause, I found a lot of mistakes and some chapters are shorter.. I think the plot, The world and the characters are good but I suggest that you should describe the characters even and the world background even more so that the people can imagine what's really going on. You are very creative and thoughtful, I really like the title and the synopsis (Sorry if I spelled it incorrectly) is also great. If you don't have an editor or something and if you can't read it to check if the spelling is incorrect then you should tell the readers to just ignore those mistakes or you'll just fix it later.. Telling your readers what you feel is very important! You must have great understanding as well cause there will be a time when the readers will be frustrated because they didn't like the flow of the story, Sometimes you have to listen to them but sometimes you shouldn't because IT is your story and not theirs.