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Review Detail of Hentai_Senchou in Star Wars: The Holy Empire

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Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv63yrHentai_Senchou

So bad. Starts with the cliche 'saved a kid from a truck,' then he gets wishes from god. God agrees to give him the ability to be immortal and make others immortal. Also gives him a system that guarantees he will become a god soon. Starts on naboo and instantly becomes a strong jedi knight because of a starter box. Most of one of the chapters was 'ding: You got this item/technique.' First thing he does is rush to seduce a 14 year old (he's a grown man.)Didn't work for any of his powers and immediately jumps to calling the jedi fools that are shortsided, destined to die. Got a wish from god that makes it so neither the light or dark side of the force can corrupt him, and is extremely cocky about him being right and other force users being wrong. Got an hk-47 assassin droid from the system. It's 100 percent loyal to him... If he told it to never kill meatbags again and instead raise a flower garden, hk would reluctantly agree. 0 effort went into showing hk his abilities and personality , all to earn hk's loyalty. He's just an edgy darth revan fanboy that thinks it's cool to wear revan's clothes and mask while showing off. Tried to act cool by exposing the real queen in front of everyone, in an attempt to be her bodyguard, so he can seduce a kid. Then 'shockingly' the real queen gets kidnapped. It's just a bunch of characters dumbed down so the mc can try to look smart and cool in front of everyone. He's like one of those losers that hacks in an online game, only for everyone to be able to see he has horrible game sense and doesn't even know the callouts on the map. He's also at risk of losing if someone really good at the game shows up.

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Star Wars: The Holy Empire

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_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4_EMI_

Ok.. I was really looking forward to it, but not so much now. Immortal ability and ability to make others immortal would be cool, but if you combine it with other things, it's a bit over the top.

St_Pat
St_PatLv3St_Pat

Holy shit! That's some ridiculous SPOON FEEDING right their! Certainly not reading this fanfic now. I was never a fan of SPOON FEEDING and never will be. Even if Author did the SPOON FEEDING in the name of GOD or ROB, it doesn't change the fact that MC never worked/trained to gain his powers/skills, they are all freebies.

alteron_gamer
alteron_gamerLv1alteron_gamer

It gets better later on if you keep reading I mean its his first fan fic