Review Detail of CxD18 in Star Wars: The Holy Empire

Well the writing was good with almost no grammar mistakes. The MC is fairly OP right at the start of the fanfic, which is a must since he wants to build an empire. Also has some good force skills. The MC wants to have a harem including some aliens, which is good since what's an emperor without an harem. Hope you don't just include girls from his current timeline like Ashoka, ayala, assaji, Luminara Unduli, Adi Gallia, Shaak Ti, Mara Jade but also girls from other timelines like Satele Shan, Nomi Sunrider, Rey, Leia, Vaylin. Hope this gives you some ideas for the harem 😅.