Writing quality is decent, there is a bit of outlining which is great. 20 chapters in a day is amazing, but you should've made it a consistent release with at least a chapter per day to gather more readers. Grammatical errors are kept minimum if not close to none (I just woke up so I don't know if my eyes auto-corrected stuff or not). If you want to read a laid-back story or a change of pace, this will be a good read for you.
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