a short yet captivating first chapter. im immersed in a story with depth - a starting point for conflict within the city, an authentic world and three compelling characters. it has a great narrative voice; im left with a sense of mystery. what did they go through to make them “ready”? what stories did they hear about down below? im excited to see the unfolding of this story; it has striking potential :) it would’ve be great to see finer details about zephyria but im sure there is more to come!
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