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It lacks soul. I had high expectations because of the other reviews, but I guess we don't look for the same things in a story. The whole thing seems premature; it needs to be developed more, both the storyline and characters. I like the idea, but the execution left much to be desired. I read volume 1, and that's enough for me to decide that I won't be continuing with this novel.

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Tale of The Great Vampire Lord

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sorry I am still new and still learning more and more about writing good novel, hope someday I will write my novel up to your and others expectations