The writing quality is really great and the story is written really well.... However the story's content itsepf is garbage **** and it has really unnecessary bashing of dumbledore I mean a little bit is fine but this story does not just have a little bit of it. The updates itself are okay.... I don't really want to wrote anything else for this review so in general the story is written extremely well but the story itself is really bad
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I have not started reading the Story yet but dumbeldore bashing is always great ;) You can say what you want but dumbeldore didn't really protect Harry in the movies. I haven't read the Books and I know that the Books differ from the Movies and some characters are more likable in the Books then in the movie(Ron is an example). Well, I should start reading ,aye?🙃
I also like it but in this story I don't at least after few chapters the bashing became excessive like there was one point where harry said oh dumbledore your having no you arent supposed to be. Something like that i cant remember also the harem really sucks and the way he picks up the girls are kinda bad too but you can read it for yourself to make your own opinion.
Jasonenrick:I have not started reading the Story yet but dumbeldore bashing is always great ;) You can say what you want but dumbeldore didn't really protect Harry in the movies. I haven't read the Books and I know that the Books differ from the Movies and some characters are more likable in the Books then in the movie(Ron is an example). Well, I should start reading ,aye?🙃
I have started reading the First two chapters and I can already see what you mean . It really is a bit excessive bashing ! Also, Snape is really Bad written He is a spy Death Eater and one or Voldemort's favourites.....he is a calm and calcutiv Person. He wouldn't scream" What!!!!" Or smirk or smth else . The most he would do is having a little smile on his face !
RandomIsGood:I also like it but in this story I don't at least after few chapters the bashing became excessive like there was one point where harry said oh dumbledore your having no you arent supposed to be. Something like that i cant remember also the harem really sucks and the way he picks up the girls are kinda bad too but you can read it for yourself to make your own opinion.
If u understand what i mean pls review this novel as although its a good novel it does not deserve the 4.8 star rating and seeing it annoys me but i dont want to be that guy that just spams one star reviews as thats a asshole move
Jasonenrick:I have started reading the First two chapters and I can already see what you mean . It really is a bit excessive bashing ! Also, Snape is really Bad written He is a spy Death Eater and one or Voldemort's favourites.....he is a calm and calcutiv Person. He wouldn't scream" What!!!!" Or smirk or smth else . The most he would do is having a little smile on his face !
If u understand what i mean pls review this novel as although its a good novel it does not deserve the 4.8 star rating and seeing it annoys me but i dont want to be that guy that just spams one star reviews as thats a asshole move
Jasonenrick:I have started reading the First two chapters and I can already see what you mean . It really is a bit excessive bashing ! Also, Snape is really Bad written He is a spy Death Eater and one or Voldemort's favourites.....he is a calm and calcutiv Person. He wouldn't scream" What!!!!" Or smirk or smth else . The most he would do is having a little smile on his face !
I did, mine is 3.2 Stars , the Novel deserves it in my opinion!
RandomIsGood:If u understand what i mean pls review this novel as although its a good novel it does not deserve the 4.8 star rating and seeing it annoys me but i dont want to be that guy that just spams one star reviews as thats a asshole move
Indeed. Dumbeldore completely screwed with Harry's life from begining to end. And in the books it is probably a little worse than in the movies, but not much. I always found it funny how people continue to say good things about him, despite all the bad things he did. Personaly, I think that most readers are not able to think benieth the surface of things, so if a story presents a character in a good light, despite the cruelty of his actions, then most people will believe he is a good character.
Jasonenrick:I have not started reading the Story yet but dumbeldore bashing is always great ;) You can say what you want but dumbeldore didn't really protect Harry in the movies. I haven't read the Books and I know that the Books differ from the Movies and some characters are more likable in the Books then in the movie(Ron is an example). Well, I should start reading ,aye?🙃
