Review Detail of cackles24 in Fate's Reversal: The Divines Return
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It gives me the vibes of "Reincarnation of the strongest sword god". Perhaps it was inspired by it, but I hope it will not turn into the loop of ever-stronger guilds to fight... So far it gives me a lot of hope for a good long successful novel that would be one of the best of the mmorpg genre novels. Slight critique is that the world building feels slightly rushed, but if that means the novel will not be too slow paced and kills the interest of impatient readers like myself, so be it. **: first review ever, love the novel so far and best of luck.
Fate's Reversal: The Divines Return
Syphiinz
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Correct, alot of my formating and things are other inspired by other VRMMORPG novels and also some cultivation novels as well. But as for, world building I was getting the opposite impression. I feel like its dr a sinfully slow haha. Like based on my outline, all the events which have been witnessed are basic ones. I haven't even started Kingdom Building or secret reveals yet haha. I've been putting a lot of focus on the team/guild getting stronger. Also, this world isn't designed like ROSSG, and others so guilds aren't the dominant enemy here. While there will be shuffles they won't be relatively dynamic to the plot. But by all means, please stick around I enjoy having you here~ It will absolutely be a long read.
well compared to other novels up to thousands of chapters then I may have judged it against them wrongly as it is still early in the novel, but keep it up and I can't wait to read more.
Syphiinz:Correct, alot of my formating and things are other inspired by other VRMMORPG novels and also some cultivation novels as well. But as for, world building I was getting the opposite impression. I feel like its dr a sinfully slow haha. Like based on my outline, all the events which have been witnessed are basic ones. I haven't even started Kingdom Building or secret reveals yet haha. I've been putting a lot of focus on the team/guild getting stronger. Also, this world isn't designed like ROSSG, and others so guilds aren't the dominant enemy here. While there will be shuffles they won't be relatively dynamic to the plot. But by all means, please stick around I enjoy having you here~ It will absolutely be a long read.
Ah that's definitely true, they usually move at a snails pace haha. But there's a few things I need to get out of the way before creating the small incremental progressions. Keep in mind, everyone is still in towns and have yet to even venture to Cities.
cackles24:well compared to other novels up to thousands of chapters then I may have judged it against them wrongly as it is still early in the novel, but keep it up and I can't wait to read more.