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TheWonderofEgypt
TheWonderofEgyptLv14yr
2020-07-11 17:55

The story is good. The writing is very details and meticulous. There are so many characters, but the author describe the important ones in a very good way. The world building is impressive. The pace of the plot is normal I think, not that slow, not that fast either. The update stability is quite stable to be honest, it's just that the amount of chapters per weeks is too few lol coz I hope it could be more than that. But, I love the story as a whole. RECOMMENDED! ✔ PS: Author, where is the romance? Give me the romance more 😥😍

My Seven Souls : The Legend of The Queen of The Ocean

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Thepiousprayer
ThepiousprayerLv1

1. Reincarnation/Tranmigration √ 2. System √ 3. Charming FL √ 4. Sci-Fi + Cultivation √ 5. Modern √ 6. Level-Up √ 7. Alternate Universe √ +Well, the story so far is quite good for me. The writing is very good. There was a bit typos, but not a big problem. I could read it comfortably, and it is one of the best if I have to say. +The update is quite slow, only 2 ch/weeks. How I wish it could update more frequently. But even if it's slow, it is very stable. + world building is good. I can literally imagine how the structure of the world. It's truly 'The world of water'. Ehem, seemed like 'floating world' is a bit popupar nowadays? I found the world in this novel is very unique tho, and I guess there would be more worlds in the future? Because beside the 'water world', I've found another one recently in this novel. + Characters design? Personally, I think it's good enough. The author described how the characters in detail, their appearances, attitudes, and so on. I wish the author describe more about my Lord Draco uwu heheheh I still confused who's the main lead, Idk who's to ship yet *give me hint, author* +Plot? Well, I must say it's a bit slow. But I dont have a problem with it. I'm just a bit itchy to see a new development. Give me moreeee ↖(^ω^)↗ + The FL is OP, because she also has an OP system lol I like it. +Recommended √ I just hope, author, please don't drop this!

4yr

daoistheavenly
daoistheavenlyLv1

I coincidentally found this novel, and I can say it's a bit different from the typical reincarnation or transmigration novels out there. I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THE STORY SO MUCH! Looking forward to the next chapterssssss!!!! ♥ Much Love from Ascension Island (●´з`)♡

4yr
GemmaAllegra
GemmaAllegraLv1

I love how the author managed to make me imagine every detail and scene in the story. The writer's imagination really made me see a new world that was so interesting. I will continue to look forward to the development of this story.

4yr
OkkyJellyDrink
OkkyJellyDrinkLv1

The type of reincarnators (These were the list that I've ever read, there maybe that I haven't read yet): Then, what type of reincarnation own by our MC here? #Reincarnate as a wastrel? Nope! #Reincarnate as an eldest miss, second miss, third miss, seventh lady, ninth miss, 100th miss? Nope! #Reincarnate as a princess? Nope! #Reincarnate as a useless daughter of a marquiss, duke, baron, prince? Nope! #Reincarnate as a maid? Nope! #Reincarnate as a cannon fodder? Nope! #Reincarnate as a villain/villainess? Nope! #Reincarnate as a divine pysician? Still Nope! What else? Hahaha Well, this novel still about reincarnation. It's just that our FL was reincarnated into a queen? What queen? The QUEEN OF OCEAN! Isn't it so badass man?! Uh, I love OP MC. Our FL still so weak now, but in my opinion, the FL is pretty smart and a hardworker. She's also lucky to obtain a super awesome system that looked like a 'super market' for me. It made our ordinary MC become super powerful as a result. After all, it got almost everything that the MC need. The heck! Can I have the system? Haha The writing is pretty good for me recalling that the MC isn't a native in English. I give 95/100 The world building is good enough. 95/100 The character's design is very much clear. 90/100 The plot/story development is a bit confusing and slow for me. Nevertheless, I still like it, coz it made me think about the many possibilities that may happen in the story. 85/100 The stability of update is very very very slow like snail. I don't like it. But so far, author never failed to update at least 2ch/week. 70/100. (Ganbatte author! I know author also has a life outside of writing) Overall, the idea of the story is actually pretty interesting. But I hope the author could make it more interesting than this, if not, the supreme idea would become a waste. Anyway, 4 thumbs up for author. Here, take my 5 stars! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

4yr
WangLinRE
WangLinRELv1

So, why I'm here? It's because that heartless author force me to make a review, if not, she said she would make me into a mincemeat. *scared* Hahaha well, because I'm a good person and like to help others, I would reluctantly type a few words here lol To be honest, I just read a few chapters, and because I'm new to this kind of fantasy stuff or whatsoever, I found it very interesting actually. The ideas of the story is very much wonderful. My curiosity was picked up immediately after a few chapter. So, yeah the story has potential. I'm awed with the author's imagination. Keep up the good work, author! Don't forget you promise to treat me to a meal wahahahaha

4yr
Milla_Nurjanati
Milla_NurjanatiLv1

Ohh this is a result of great imagination. Let chasing all of fantasy in this novel to bright up your sense. Good luck for orion you are amazing. Cant wait for your work

4yr
Patientreader
PatientreaderLv2

I didn't know that there was a little problem at the previous novel. I thought that the author has no chapters to upload or even drop this novel already. Fortunately, I noticed the sino**is quickly and come here. I must say that there was already a good development compared to before. I gave 4.2 stars previously when the amount of chapters were only seven. Now I give the author five stars. I like this novel and hope the author could keep his/her good job until this novel is finished. So far, what I like from this author is how he/she can describe a situation in a very detail and vivid way as if I was witnessing the scene directly. Keep fighting, author. Keep up the good job.

4yr
LinTian
LinTianLv1

There are several points that I want to explain in my review: 1.The opening is so much captivating. It makes me anticipate what could possibly happen next. The writing is getting better. The world building is good. The romance is not rush and forced. It moves in a steady paces. 2. I like when I get bored in reading the story, the author immediately create a fire and makes me want to keep reading. There were many puzzling parts, but perhaps it would be cleared up by author later on. I'm looking forward when the mc become much stronger and act like a real queen of ocean. 3. Even though reincarnation is basically a common theme in webnovel, but I love how the author takes a different path in creating the situation. 4. The cultivation system has a similar concept with the usual ones, but the author gave a vibe of science in it, which makes it seems more real and could be realized if human really could reach that high in the field of technology and science. 5. The terms of the external equipment and how the cultivator called qilathor was a bit awkward first, but when I read more, I find it becomes normal. The author had successfully makes me accept this new concept of this cultivation. 6. The emotional build up is just so so in my opinion, it's not the best, but it's not bad either. Perhaps because it is still early. Still, I anticipate more. 7. I like this story also include the theme of 'kingdom building', but I guess the mc still has a long journey to build his kindom of universe's ocean? 8. The conclusion is, until this current chaps (44) I still love this story.

4yr
Amelia_B_Clarck
Amelia_B_ClarckLv1

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