Overall good fanfic, MC is a bit bland without exact personality beyond womanizer and sandbox game player(it's like playing Minecraft in creative mode). My suggestion if you make new project of multiverse is don't make MC op on the first dimension specially after several days of training, if you can make MC have some power no much for dimension that have solid use, then on other universe he get another power an so on that make him creative and op. It will make MC more iconic and the novel will have more spice in it. If you create multiverse type novel but stuck MC long enough to become literally primordial god it will change the genre into single universe novel (in this case ATG), end when 'MC' jump to other universe it become bland and chaotic not in good way i mean.
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