Review Detail of amaturewriter in DC/Marvel: A True Sabretooth

MC is an asshole and bad...like u **** with him, he'd kill you and make your daughter and wives work at a brothel...so yah, dont **** with him. Overall,...the writing, story and plot are dope,,,,its an SI sabretooth....so yah...definitely interesting...BUT i kinda dont like that the may behave like a hot headed idiot and get ****ed..so maybe balance it?...like I kinda get making victor a hot head, SI or not cause he is sabretooth, but at the same time he is an SI,,,so maybe balance it, and dont make him a merciful idiot........other than that...stories dope...also its nice that he isnt racist...maybe save slaves?....for good, cause its sad and a horrible thing but you could do it for loyalty or some**** like that. Suggestion: make MC be smart and use his SI knowledge for his advantage and also maybe create a loyal army....?....a power for MC..cause he needs one to match the ****ers in MCU....maybe something like akutagawas RUSHOMON?..like that does suit MC, its OP and kinda savagery and all bloody....OP defense and maybe add some**** to it too....like dimension manipulation or something to match infinity stone powers? I'd ask for romance, but I dont know if it'll suit here?......but if you do romance, pls make it happy and not some forced ****ty with some worthless slutty *****.....IDK, make her someone strong and would u know, be loyal and helpful to MC........could be an OC or someone from MCU....honestly think BAST [from black panther] as a pairing would be funny