Review Detail of _Goodies_ in Pokemon the Force

The grammar is terrible and is in need of proofreading or perhaps you could hire an editor. Still, don't drop this book because of my review, you have a lot of fans. Keep up the work and good luck! I'm sorry but grammar mistakes really irritate me. It ruins not only the writing quality but also the plot because it would be hard to comprehend. Stability of Updates, this is an automatic five stars for me. I usually rate all novels five stars when it comes to this category. The plot is good but common. Most Pokemon fanfic plots are usually like this. Basically, the mc meets god type of fanfic. I've read a lot of fanfics with this type of beginning but still, your plot is good and interesting. I'm sorry but I have to drop this novel in chapter fourteen. There are too many errors and mistakes, it not only irks me but deters me from my read. All the best to the author and I hope this review will not leave you disappointed or angry. Do not drop the novel for your fans!