Great beginning becoming shit I dropped at chapter 14 End of world even if the person talking to you is capable would you follow their commands without question What about their own families To difficult to believe that shit
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LIKEauthor if you wrote a story with say 300 chapters but didn't catch readers attention due to certain things at start. but claim that if they read to chapter 281 it will be explained why would they continue reading I personally hoped for something like tales of demons and gods with focus on MCs progression MC is already op in comparison, MC is to domineering (a negative ) just because he is suffering from post traumatic stress with visions of what could happen