Review Detail of 08082000kiran in Return of the last survivor

Item: Return of the last survivor
Rating: 2.4

Review detail

08082000kiranLv53yr08082000kiran

The story and the past is good and the development of the story is like a smooth water flow but have u thought that when the acloplyse started human laws will not crumble very fast and the mc behaves like when he is from the past because humanity will not crumble in a day at least it will take a week or so. In my opinion aurthor u have disturbed the flow of river when he trash talks those police officers because everyone has a self respect and will not bow down easily so that’s the very clear that u have messed the story Sorry for the harsh words and if u read it u can read some other authors writers work and u can gain some insight. I don’t know how u good reviews thought they didn’t even pointed out simple mistakes 😞 Even though it wasted my time typing I like your world background hence i thought I pointed these things if not readers will get disappointed and will leave the novel 😑

Return of the last survivor

Shadow_Magus

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WinnieLePoohLv13WinnieLePooh

Ehh I don't think so, because in reality most of the authorities would be busy doing other stuff like idk taking care of the high personal because they care more about people with money than the poor people.

3yr

WinnieLePoohLv13WinnieLePooh

Because if the authorities help you instead of rich people they gain less and when the apocalypse happened it probably drew out the worst in people, most would turn on people and suck up to those who have power so they can bunker down for a while

3yr

Shadow_MagusAuthorShadow_Magus

Yes, so the thing is, society has collapsed this quickly because of the random zombiefication process. People randomly turned into zombies, and so the world went to shit cause of that. Now we all know what happens in normal zombie novels, where everything starts from a patient 0. However, Imagine if people randomly became zombies, like the person next to you, a random soldier, or even high-value personnel like maybe the president, etc. Now, tell me society would still function?

3yr