Right so this review is for those undecided wether to go in on this. This is a non-standard OP-MC harem collecting world hopping story. Now that that's out of the way, the MC won't get every girl in existence and will mostly focus on more mature *cough*MILF*cough* women. If you don't think this is your cup of tea then please understand that many, such as myself, find solace in the fantasy that this is to escape the horrors of boredom. Thank you Peace

Like seriously making your system a male like what kind of retard will choose it . And even giving it a body lol is mc so lonely that he wants to wish for a male ( absolutely gayly) friend disgusting. Is this shi*ty mc's gay personality hasn't awaken yet . And to top it he even give this system a harem with girls like Hinata and Co . This shi*ty story is even worse than a ntr story. You have some great taste author so keep it up. This disgusting shi*ty gayly(as he wish for a male system ) story is pure toxic for my eyes . I wish it will never appear before me again as if it does then it will remind me how shi*ty this story i read was.

Most annoying system even personified the system gave it a body and its own harem. Story mostly consists of system *****iness, Info dumps and summarizing changed fantasy world plots. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩☠☠☠☠☠☠☠☠💩💩💩💩💩🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬

im sorry if the following words offends you author. i just dont like the way it progress (well, you're the author so it's useless), i really don't like the way he chooses the system/great sage to be a man, i mean you choose it to be emotionless yeah? and why no male friends? there are people there he can be with like azazel right? Then here we go with the Great sage's harem, i dont know why but i feel like the mc is sharing women to his companion like it's nothing, i don't even understand why you decided to make hinata love him xD i honestly expected the hinata sister to be with him or just hinata but i did not expext her to be with mc's companion, i felt that it's ridiculous. ah i remember the part where the mc said smth like "i'll have more women besides me, are you sure?" then tsunade said the least i expected, she said something like "don't worry, i still have the clones" to which the mc shrugged it off like nothing... i mean that complete BS she could have said smth better right? like "it's okay, just don't forget me" or "i don't care as long as you love me"... CLONES?! i honesly feel like its NTR to yourself, to which i don't like very very much. i honestly don't feel good reading this one the conversations with the mc and the great sage and his enemy confuses me greatly, don't know why... that's pretty much it...

Writing Quality: 4/5 The grammar is not bad, far from perfect, but it is quite legible! Stability Of Upadtes: 5/5 The update rate is good! Story Development: 1/5 The development of the history is very precarious, almost without development, things just "happen". He just travel from world to world without basically making any significant changes in the respective worlds. The story itself not go "forward", remains stagnant. Character Design: 1/5 The development of the characters is basically the same as that of the story, very precarious, not to say null. Things just happen, without reason and without development. Basically the characters and the relationships between them do not pass any emotion and as if they were machines. I know the story is a harem, but he basically just arrives or asks a girl to be in his harem and almost automatically they accept it, meaningless. totally one-dimensional characters! World Background: 3/5 The world scenario he at least keeps a little of the original works, but he explains almost nothing about the world and does not add anything new. In fact, some important information is missing from these worlds. In short, if you like a well-developed and well-crafted story, this story is not for you. But if you like to read the story to spend time it is acceptable, the story is basically the same generic cliche as almost all other multiverse/dimensional traveler fanfics. So you already know what to expect, but the story itself is a little funny!

Yaa~ let's not talking about your story (because i not read it yet). Your Cover make it Uninteresting and your tittle too.. i don't even know that this is anime/reincarnation/harem fanfic if not because i search #Harem fanfic... well.. i just want to say that.. alright let me read your story.. I have high expectation after reading the reviews~

HOPE THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

did not like it . . .

Well, you can see that the five star is definitely a spam review... But wh ocares? It's free anyway... And my true opinion of this story is, it's a bit mess up... One time he is in the companion of three goddess, then aksing for a force energy type world and then directly goes to Naruto world without exploring, only give out a bit of "Wait ofr me, book of shadow!! "..

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