Review Detail of NormalGuy in Ilan Burke - Multiverse

People who like kingdom building can read this and not be upset by it ... maybe, but for me this is boring as hell. I read the other reviews and tried to go back to it, but I can't, it's like an actual chore. He makes a lot of companies really fast, but it doesnt feel good to read. The fun in kingdom building novels is watching in real time how the main character build up his faction and faces problems with making his faction stronger and you get to see how the main character solves that issue and the steps he takes to do that, but in this the main character just doesn't do that. He makes like 8 companies or more and they just immediately become the best at what they are doing and there is no competition or political wars, the companies just immediately overpower everyone else in the business and it's just not fun to read. It's like one of those self insert fan fics where the mc wishes to be god and goes to anime worlds but the author still tries to make it an action novel so it just becomes boring as ****, it's like that but with businesses. We know he's going to be the best in every thing he dips his hands into and it's just predictable and not fun to read, but it has decent grammar for this website and the world building is obviously going to be good cause the world is already built for him, even if everything the mc builds for himself is boring and predictable as all hell. I don't know about the update rate, I didn't check cause I didn't care enough. Check it out and like maybe you'll find something good once he gets to Hogwarts idk, I didn't get that far cause it would have been a punishment to force myself to read more with how slow this is. Oh yeah he also increases his charm a lot so expect a big harem where girls fall over themselves to get to the mc later on in the story.