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A_Canadian
A_CanadianLv113yrA_Canadian

A bit weird that when he flashes a 'psychotic smile' nobody seems bothered until the author writes that they finally notice. Like he flashes this same goddamn smile five times a chapter and class 1-A and his teachers never bother reacting to it. Other than that the whole Toga thing seems rushed, but hey it was good enough. The story itself was heading into a cool direction, but hey no updates. Spelling was fine. Overall you could read bits and pieces to see if you like this, I wont deter you.

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Forgotten - Villain Deku [BNHA/MHA AU]

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I agree with the Toga thing, it did kinda want to get that out of the way so I admit that I rushed it. As for the updates, I always say at the end of each chapter when the next season is coming. Season 3 will be starting soon and I have had a break since almost finishing Season 4, which is an original section of the story.