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TokyoAnime_Seven
TokyoAnime_SevenLv104yr
2020-05-18 21:03

I read all the chapters released till now the story plot is damn intersting,the prologue writing style was good too much good that it was captivating but after that the second chapter gets a little boring but as the plot continues the excitement keep on rising.

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Zelkolak
ZelkolakAuthor

Thank you for the feedback. Indeed the story will become better👍

Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4

Now I know why Seven doesnt release chapters on time. he keeps reading other novels and forgets to release chapters for his own novel

TokyoAnime_Seven
TokyoAnime_SevenLv10

Cough, I am rewriting my chs day and night now. Read the ch 1, Rebirth when u have time, and see the difference. ( ꈍᴗꈍ) Also i will update continuously from 15th august. Promise 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Nikhil_Chand:Now I know why Seven doesnt release chapters on time. he keeps reading other novels and forgets to release chapters for his own novel
TokyoAnime_Seven
TokyoAnime_SevenLv10

I have decided to become a full time Writer till university opens up. (That i think won't open up till next year) 😂😂🤣

Nikhil_Chand:Now I know why Seven doesnt release chapters on time. he keeps reading other novels and forgets to release chapters for his own novel
Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4

yeah seeing the situation in our country it doesnt look like universities will open anytime soon

TokyoAnime_Seven:I have decided to become a full time Writer till university opens up. (That i think won't open up till next year) 😂😂🤣
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LordValmar
LordValmarLv4

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