Review Detail of MikXL_23 in The Creation Stone

Well. What can I say... Honestly, this story is extremely confusing at the moment. I couldn't understand anything that was happening, all the characters you introduced sounded obsolete, or to be more metaphorical, soulless. The worldbuilding is barely explained on the synopsis although when reading the story I couldn't grasp anything! I didn't know what the hell is going on the state of the world and the characters! The english is readable, it doesn't have too much problems on the grammar other than the speech and thought pharagraphs. If I'm going to put this story into a few words, it would've been... *Confused clusterfunk*. Sorry if my review is kinda harsh but I'm being honest, your story is simply confusing and could use some work and more detail. Even now I still don't know how the MC looks like! And I can barely grasp anything about the power system or supernatural elements on the story!