Review Detail of heidichristine in Gate of Immortality

Honestly, this is my first time ever reading a story with this type of fantasy. I didn't know about the terms in the story but the descriptions are nice and it has a good start to it. Although, there might be some grammatical errors and misplaced of commas and periods. I think this book has a potential. The author did a great job 😊 Please keep it up author!