Review Detail of damilon in My Knowledge Of Cultivation Is Completely Shattered

the story produces a new outlook on reincarnation novels with a confusion element to the mc, unfortunately the storyelement ment to make it comic relief also makes the story difficult to follow for the reader. It is missing it's structural integrity with both the worldbuilding and the paragraph building. the story is building on a difference between an old system and a new better system. The story are neither explaining nor is diving deeper into what the main story device is trying to do. Without a proper explanation it would be just as reasonable plot device to just be born, the comic relief and unanswered questions makes it a headache to start with, it stabilizes around chapter 30, but the introduction could be cut short by 28 chapters. However it is still a interesting take on cultivation and it can be strong story, if the beginning could be strengthened by some proofreading or explanation. with a focus on nonsensical parts instead of story it will instead mock the foundation it is trying to create in a universe instead of creation the comedical story it is trying to make. just soso but good enough