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Well, since this is a cultivation story, seeing it deviate from the usual concept of using chakra instead of qi is quite novel of an idea. Our MC is continuously being brought down by the people around him, which is the common premise that is seen for main leads. I do hope that the MC will have a gradual growth rather than an exponential one. I sometimes wish that, instead of experiencing the bottom, the MC's motivation would be the simple idea of wanting to get stronger, or it's because they look up to their parents. Your title gives out the proceedings of the story, so as a suggestion, put a little bit of mystery in it? Also, there are a lot of dialogues in the passages making it any easy read. Of course, we all make grammatical errors. However, it is something that is easily proofread. Arming yourselves with the mastery of the English grammar will enable you to have a better flow and transition. This is merely constructive. I'm not saying this out of spite. Your story has a good setting! Please run wild with your imagination! I'll be cheering you on number 7!

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My Knowledge Of Cultivation Is Completely Shattered

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