This novel is amazing I love it. The story line is fun the orc pov is really done well. Plus the plot isn't just forced or just has plot armor! it works the way it's meant to and makes sense, and to be honest that's all you need to get 5 stars from me. Though sometimes the writing quality dips a bit, ik you've said before you plan to do a mass correction thing and tbh they are just a few spelling mistakes here and there so here is the 5 star for writing quality ahead of time! But make sure to correct them all! dont let me down!!!!!! and keep being awesome (also I don't mind the other pov thing but so others don't complain keep it to 2 POVs and clearly write Alex's POV or POV ??? / unknown or something like that, so they don't get confused ) thank for reading here's one year's worth of luck you'll need it for 2021
Daoist_Xuyi
Liked by 3 people
LIKENo replies. Be the first!