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RachelRuth
RachelRuthLv134yr
2020-05-18 19:21

The title, cover and synopsis are stellar! It immediately hooked me, and once I started reading? It got me addicted. I'm one of the people who prefer 'Vampires' over 'Wolves' but the Author has managed to make something wonderful out of this WPC's prompt. The worldbuilding and background to how the world began to have these 'Alpha, Beta and Omega' is simply well crafted and it brings you to appreciate the story regardless of whether or not you like the idea of ABO. Now, the heroine is pretty weak as an Omega but I'm excited to see how her character will grow. (Spoiler: I'm calling dibs on 'Kaicho', I'm feeling good about this )

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This book is amazing... I loved the plot and I hope Ayumi could be saved from those hunters. I'm a big fan of this author's previous book, so I'm sure this book would be amazing even if she is writing it for fun. I want to read more. Gambare Author!!!!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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I am gonna crazy over reading this..... This feels so damn addicted..... Want to read every next chapters of the story.... Dear author... Your work is amazing.... I am attracted to your stories... I just started reading this story...it is amazing... All of your works are damn good to me.... Keep going.... You are a part of my smile... Thank you Love you author 💜

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This is an incredible book. The story and character build-up is amazing. The author has a good grip on the plot development. The portray of different emotions is spot on and marvelously done. The first few chapters are enough for me to say that the author knows how to keep the readers hooked. It has all the essential elements and is a complete package. This is an amazing book and a must-read for everyone. Keep up the good work author. Hwaiting Ayumi.

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I love this story, it has some really good elements and is always intense, like always. I was on the edge of my seat going through a roller-coaster of emotions. But, remember to stick to a tense, though very rare there are moments where the tenses change which can be a lil distracting. But that doesn't change that the book is a 10/10!

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Now I know what it means to never judge a book by its cover. READERS! don't be FOOLED! This story is definitely one of a kind. Came from Kiiara's first book and never thought she was capable of writing this. I wasn't expecting much honestly but when I read this, omg did I receive a huge shock. A good surprise tho! The plot itself is really intriguing. I srsly don't know how u were able to cook this up. Anyway, first two chapters already got me hooked! And as I continued to read, it drove me several times on edge. It was thrilling and sexy at the same time! Srsly Kiiara, this is really hot lmao 😂 You said u r experimenting with this book but wow u went wild! 😆

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I'm definitely going to recommend this to all... Well, cough cough... Not all... Mature ones. Hehe. Coming back to why I find this lovely and interesting. Firstly, writing style is pretty good. Secondly, it got me hooked as soon as I started reading it. Thirdly, I never thought that an Alpha Beta Omega novel could be like this!! I mean, it's out of my expectations. Definitely above it. Fourthly, cough cough... It's steamy...(**: I'm currently posting the review after reading a steamy chapter. Can't get it out of my head, lol).. Fifth, I can't say anymore, go and read it to find it out yourself. Definitely recommended by this Mighty One...

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There are a few clarity issues. For example: It would contaminate its victim's blood by leaving trails of deathly residue that remained unknown to this day as what chemical particle it was. The above sentence affects readability and feels like a run-on with its strange structure. This type of sentence structure reoccurs a lot in the story, distracting the reader. You can instead write something like: It would contaminate its victim's blood by leaving trails of an unknown and deathly residue. This is simpler and easier to understand what you are trying to convey. Besides this, there's nothing negative enough to be pointed out in this story. The plot captivating, with world-building that is exquisite. It is very clear that the author took a lot of time to research and plan the writing. I was immediately absorbed by the story. Good job, author! :)

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I like your book. Its intriguing and gets a reader hooked. Your explanation is great, same with your writing quality. I see this novel getting more views as people would obviously enjoy it. Good novel 👍👍👍👍👍

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BaeVida
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Wow, catchy title, oops haven't read the synopsis my bad, I just jumped in to see which is stupid of me but I never regretted it. I love, love, love the book. For a novel u are writing for fun... *cleans sweat* sure is good. I love the flow and pacing of your novel. Like its simply intriguing, you should have entered this for spirity. I like the concept, plotline and so far I haven't noticed any grammatical errors after reading seven chapters. Character design, story development, world background all on point. I must say, good detailed description and dialogue. This is a gud work author, for a first time writing fantasy, I give my respect. I have read your other book and its great. This is jus as thrilling. It felt as though I was with Ayumi and Chinatsu when they were leaving. D suspense 👍. It is a pure recommended, come n enjoy reading guys. Adds to my library, what are u waiting for? Good work, keep it up author-chan.

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