Review Detail of _VA_ in xxxxxxx

The story has a captivating plot, with unique characters and good writing quality. I especially liked the "cat in a banana hat" idea. Something I feel you can improve on is clarity. I am a little confused, even after five chapters, on what exactly is happening, particularly about the dungeon exploration. You talked about an RPG group and how playing RPGs feels nice, so I thought that the characters did the dungeon exploration in-game. But then it didn't seem like merely a game when there were officials that examined documents etc. If it wasn't a game, then what is the motivation for the MC to go risk her life to explore dungeons? Also, on the meditation stuff from the first chapter, does that have anything to do with the leveling up or anything? It confused me. In addition, although the author uses descriptive writing to convey emotions, I feel like the main character's tone is too neutral. It feels like he or she (the fact that I don't the gender is a problem) is telling a story instead of actively being a part of it. Besides the points I've stated above, no other errors are obvious enough to affect the writing, at least in my opinion. Over all, this was a good read, so good job, author! :)