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AnotherFiction
AnotherFictionLv13yrAnotherFiction

Author is half-assed man, i mean,, here is what he want from the third wish in the prologue chapter _______For my final wish, i would like to adjust my physique to my prefferences. Third wish was extremely important because if he didn't have the body to fully utilize the first two gifts, then there was no meaning in using precious wishes to obtain them_______~prologue but, he collapse because of his third wish doesn't work, and the Masochist Author claimed that it was too tiring for MC to use his first two gifts in the game against GOM. Is that your fuc***g prefference? You smoking man? is this your so called fiction? or.. "half-assed fiction" wake up you masochist!!!, don't bring your suffering in real life to your reader.

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Rebirth in KurokoNoBasket [DROPPED]

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Jayology
JayologyLv11Jayology

Lets take the cursing out man. His third wish was so that he can UTULIZE his first 2 gifts. The main character isnt even in highschool yet let alone reached canon. also, his third wish was granted cause guess what, he can use them. Did you really expect him to use the ability constantly throughout the ENTIRE game by himself? His ability is game breaking already. The story hasnt even reached the canon man. Just chill out and be patient or drop the novel.

Clown_Of_God
Clown_Of_GodLv6Clown_Of_God

another author a** licker

Jayology:Lets take the cursing out man. His third wish was so that he can UTULIZE his first 2 gifts. The main character isnt even in highschool yet let alone reached canon. also, his third wish was granted cause guess what, he can use them. Did you really expect him to use the ability constantly throughout the ENTIRE game by himself? His ability is game breaking already. The story hasnt even reached the canon man. Just chill out and be patient or drop the novel.
Jayology
JayologyLv11Jayology

Another a$$ ****er whose got too much time on his hands. lol

Clown_Of_God:another author a** licker
DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv4DragoPackMan

GOM also not in highschool yet

Jayology:Lets take the cursing out man. His third wish was so that he can UTULIZE his first 2 gifts. The main character isnt even in highschool yet let alone reached canon. also, his third wish was granted cause guess what, he can use them. Did you really expect him to use the ability constantly throughout the ENTIRE game by himself? His ability is game breaking already. The story hasnt even reached the canon man. Just chill out and be patient or drop the novel.
Jayology
JayologyLv11Jayology

Yes, your right, lets just say that each generation of miracle had 70 percent of his power ability and skill. If you put all of them together to take down one man, the odds of them winning still increases. considering that this game was a win until he collapsed, Im not surpirsed at all. Dont get me wrong, if the MC won, that would be kinda wierd cause, this is only their 2nd year in middle school. I personally expect the win to happen in his third year. Thin about how the story progressed and what would happen if the MC won. there would still be a following year which would make things a little unsure in terms of the intrest of the story. Now think about the current setup. Its like hyping up the next battle where everyone starts to hope for an overwhelming victory.

DragoPackMan:GOM also not in highschool yet
DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv4DragoPackMan

MC is not alone and his team not worst as portrayed in this novel.some members even called as uncrowned king in original and as u said for better story or plot author nerfed his team and his wish and abilities.

Jayology:Yes, your right, lets just say that each generation of miracle had 70 percent of his power ability and skill. If you put all of them together to take down one man, the odds of them winning still increases. considering that this game was a win until he collapsed, Im not surpirsed at all. Dont get me wrong, if the MC won, that would be kinda wierd cause, this is only their 2nd year in middle school. I personally expect the win to happen in his third year. Thin about how the story progressed and what would happen if the MC won. there would still be a following year which would make things a little unsure in terms of the intrest of the story. Now think about the current setup. Its like hyping up the next battle where everyone starts to hope for an overwhelming victory.
DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv4DragoPackMan

MC is not alone and his team not worst as portrayed in this novel.some members even called as uncrowned king in original and as u said for better story or plot author nerfed his team and his wish and abilities.

Jayology:Yes, your right, lets just say that each generation of miracle had 70 percent of his power ability and skill. If you put all of them together to take down one man, the odds of them winning still increases. considering that this game was a win until he collapsed, Im not surpirsed at all. Dont get me wrong, if the MC won, that would be kinda wierd cause, this is only their 2nd year in middle school. I personally expect the win to happen in his third year. Thin about how the story progressed and what would happen if the MC won. there would still be a following year which would make things a little unsure in terms of the intrest of the story. Now think about the current setup. Its like hyping up the next battle where everyone starts to hope for an overwhelming victory.
Jayology
JayologyLv11Jayology

Your missing a chapter buddy. The MC admitted to him being too hot headed and not placing enough trust in his team already. The author didnt nerf his team. The author outright excluded his team from the battle after a certain point placing the main focus on the MC's ability as a player. This showcased the MC as an Overpowered Player, but at the same time, at the end of it, the conclusion to the battle was that Basketball is a team sport, not and individual one.

DragoPackMan:MC is not alone and his team not worst as portrayed in this novel.some members even called as uncrowned king in original and as u said for better story or plot author nerfed his team and his wish and abilities.
Jayology
JayologyLv11Jayology

Either way, its something to look foreward to right? Think about it, First battle as a pure playmaker, Second battle as a OP player by himself. Can you imagine the third battle incorperating both of those together in the third battle. Not to mention, he might even be able to handle the whole thing through to the end next time.

DragoPackMan:MC is not alone and his team not worst as portrayed in this novel.some members even called as uncrowned king in original and as u said for better story or plot author nerfed his team and his wish and abilities.
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

wow, haha, so stupid

Jayology:Either way, its something to look foreward to right? Think about it, First battle as a pure playmaker, Second battle as a OP player by himself. Can you imagine the third battle incorperating both of those together in the third battle. Not to mention, he might even be able to handle the whole thing through to the end next time.
lightbringer_007
lightbringer_007Lv4lightbringer_007

Man u got some imagination...just wow....well what you are saying maybe true...but some people don't care because like all the "realistic" people are saying basketball is a team sport..even when The "villian" of this story was hot headed and does not trust his team...but still his teammates can help and ease his burden..like seirin did in the finals..but author is S..and we all know he is better than the "MC"(gom) of this story..he can beat them 1v3...and he can beat them in High school when they are alone in a new team.....we want to see the impossible when he beat them at their best not at their worst...we don't want him to win alone but with his team..but author is hell-bent on making them looklike weak...so here are we arguing about realistic and unrealistic...first of all reincarnation with wishes(unrealistic).... superpower ed teenager(unrealistic)....we don't want him to win the championship...even after beating The "mc"(gom)...he sprain his leg and become out of commission for the rest of the tournament....we would still be happy...but it is good fanfic.. author has a great grammer updates are frequent and man he is great imagination...but man first loss was surprisingly disappointing but author already decided to make the "antagonist" lose than he should have done in 4or 6 chapters than the loss would not this disappointing...sigh..he should not have hype it up that much at starting chapters...and what of his coach not seeing his fatigue..and why the GOM were not tired they were running with him ...I know u will say it's" 1,vs5 he cannot win against them it's a team sport" but still he is training when he was 4 years old he should have better stamina then them..they should have less stamina and endurance then him...and they are too middle schooler..they are worst than him..he has a wish for top physique around his age and they are not better than him...sigh all in we were here for the impossible..we don't doubt he can win against them in High school..again 1v1..we were here to see them lose when they were team....

Jayology:Either way, its something to look foreward to right? Think about it, First battle as a pure playmaker, Second battle as a OP player by himself. Can you imagine the third battle incorperating both of those together in the third battle. Not to mention, he might even be able to handle the whole thing through to the end next time.
Jayology
JayologyLv11Jayology

Well, you are right in some cases. But if you read the previous chapters, I’m sure you will notice that shin wasn’t the only one to start playing basketball at a really early age. But your absolutely correct, he did hype it up way more than what was necessary. In terms of him playing by himself instead of relying on his team, I agree. In fact the following chapter points that part out when the MC openly agreed to this flaw with his own teammates. Luckily, I am pretty sure he will beat the GOM by next tournament cause I believe that will be his last year before canon hits. If he doesn’t beat them, even I might be tempted to drop. Lol.

lightbringer_007:Man u got some imagination...just wow....well what you are saying maybe true...but some people don't care because like all the "realistic" people are saying basketball is a team sport..even when The "villian" of this story was hot headed and does not trust his team...but still his teammates can help and ease his burden..like seirin did in the finals..but author is S..and we all know he is better than the "MC"(gom) of this story..he can beat them 1v3...and he can beat them in High school when they are alone in a new team.....we want to see the impossible when he beat them at their best not at their worst...we don't want him to win alone but with his team..but author is hell-bent on making them looklike weak...so here are we arguing about realistic and unrealistic...first of all reincarnation with wishes(unrealistic).... superpower ed teenager(unrealistic)....we don't want him to win the championship...even after beating The "mc"(gom)...he sprain his leg and become out of commission for the rest of the tournament....we would still be happy...but it is good fanfic.. author has a great grammer updates are frequent and man he is great imagination...but man first loss was surprisingly disappointing but author already decided to make the "antagonist" lose than he should have done in 4or 6 chapters than the loss would not this disappointing...sigh..he should not have hype it up that much at starting chapters...and what of his coach not seeing his fatigue..and why the GOM were not tired they were running with him ...I know u will say it's" 1,vs5 he cannot win against them it's a team sport" but still he is training when he was 4 years old he should have better stamina then them..they should have less stamina and endurance then him...and they are too middle schooler..they are worst than him..he has a wish for top physique around his age and they are not better than him...sigh all in we were here for the impossible..we don't doubt he can win against them in High school..again 1v1..we were here to see them lose when they were team....
Dertonel
DertonelLv12Dertonel

wow you're a real c#nt aren't you?

Clown_Of_God:another author a** licker