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just started using this platform but damn i didn't know that the top fanfics here is **** after all of those wishes he got he still lose? and i've read that the author wants it to be "realistic" a guy reincarnated to another world is already unrealistic so wtf is the author talking about?
Rebirth in KurokoNoBasket [DROPPED]
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How dare you. You make like your characters OP from the beginning which Shun already was stated by the team and how they could not match him one on one or could barley keep up with him. But don't give it a bad review cause your bias. I thought it was great, there was just a few grammar errors but what books on web novel don't have them ,eyh? Your review sucked. realistically what you typed was really rude, and just because he go those things to help him in his next life doesn't mean they are going to be at their full potential right off the bat. besides this is fan fiction, of course not all of it is going to be realistic, that's where the imagination comes in. Besides character development is good, you can't expect him to win right off the bat now do yah? Cause realistically speaking Shuns odds of winning were at like 40-50% cause of his team. And remember this is the GOM were talking about.
Bro that is exactly the problem. At least in the first game his teammates are strong. Now after adding those noob players to MC's team if he want to win he have to deal with all the awakened GOM all by himself. It is not that all the readers are disappointed about their first loss. Their disappointment is that if he can manage the GOM after they all awakened all by himself from second year. As you can observe that MC's team is weak ass fck in his second year. Only mibuchi is standard player who can match upto the now undeveloped kise ryota. Others are all just begginer noobs who can't even play against normal players not say about GOM. NOW tell me bro how the fck should we think about 2 VS 5 GAME where only mibuchi and mc can stand against the GOM. in 2nd year. I think now you got a clear-cut view of all the disappointed readers😏😏
Bob_The_Destroyer:How dare you. You make like your characters OP from the beginning which Shun already was stated by the team and how they could not match him one on one or could barley keep up with him. But don't give it a bad review cause your bias. I thought it was great, there was just a few grammar errors but what books on web novel don't have them ,eyh? Your review sucked. realistically what you typed was really rude, and just because he go those things to help him in his next life doesn't mean they are going to be at their full potential right off the bat. besides this is fan fiction, of course not all of it is going to be realistic, that's where the imagination comes in. Besides character development is good, you can't expect him to win right off the bat now do yah? Cause realistically speaking Shuns odds of winning were at like 40-50% cause of his team. And remember this is the GOM were talking about.
Yes but technically when they bring on Tetsuya its more even cause they got a guy for him so it's more balanced. And don't use swears they are really bad dude. No one likes swears, they just suck. But it's all learning experience, wait can't the third years come back for the nationals even after the season is over even in middle school? Ok now I have confused myself.. Tho I do wonder now how shuns team is going to fair against the GOM team now that most of them have awakened, they're probably going to have to try their hardest. they might win, it's not really clear, but the most probable answer is they lose, and that way it's closer to the original story line for the middle school part, and they turn all unmotivated and stuff. It's going to be real interesting to see what happens next.
Mandiiyy:Bro that is exactly the problem. At least in the first game his teammates are strong. Now after adding those noob players to MC's team if he want to win he have to deal with all the awakened GOM all by himself. It is not that all the readers are disappointed about their first loss. Their disappointment is that if he can manage the GOM after they all awakened all by himself from second year. As you can observe that MC's team is weak ass fck in his second year. Only mibuchi is standard player who can match upto the now undeveloped kise ryota. Others are all just begginer noobs who can't even play against normal players not say about GOM. NOW tell me bro how the fck should we think about 2 VS 5 GAME where only mibuchi and mc can stand against the GOM. in 2nd year. I think now you got a clear-cut view of all the disappointed readers😏😏
...You do realise that the author has been trying really hard with this fanfic right? You're being more harsh than constructive right now, and I for one, have been enjoying the fanfic a lot. The only problems I see are grammar and a bit of skill and character development. This is just rude, and like the author has been mentioning, his body is limiting what he can do. Shun wasn't OP in the first place, he asked for abilities around GOM level or above, and has to use them in versetile ways. So I don't understand why everyone's saying they're OP. I don't want to be rude in any way, so please don't take it the wrong way.
hmmm? shun advantages: remembering past life memories✔️ knowing about the future and the story✔️ multiple cheats from God that he can chooses ✔️ training since small, morever with knowledge beforehand✔️ decent teammates which always win before GOM appear ✔️ oh yeah... that is not OP... and a bunch of 13 years old GOM which their talent still not awakened is really strong so that with that advantage he still lose... wow
Yeet_the_sneke1045:...You do realise that the author has been trying really hard with this fanfic right? You're being more harsh than constructive right now, and I for one, have been enjoying the fanfic a lot. The only problems I see are grammar and a bit of skill and character development. This is just rude, and like the author has been mentioning, his body is limiting what he can do. Shun wasn't OP in the first place, he asked for abilities around GOM level or above, and has to use them in versetile ways. So I don't understand why everyone's saying they're OP. I don't want to be rude in any way, so please don't take it the wrong way.
