Review Detail of imhermione in The Gene Gamer

I'm pretty sure the author had best interests in creating this story and I do think that indeed, a lot of thought was poured into making it. However, the initial chapters lack elements of keeping the book interesting - I mean it in a way that, too much information dump was done, tastelessly. It can bore anyone who wants to get an initial impression and overview of the plot. Thanks, but if you can do a few edits, that would be better.