Review Detail of Crazy_Beast in The Gene Gamer

Okay, the second review of the day. This is my review after reading chapter 1, it wasn't because of the story not being interring enough, but rather I have no time. So, the plot is a gem, but left unploshed sue to negligence and well, authors lack of consciousness. I ain't sayinG Author isn't good enough or this book is trash. I personally liv d what I read in chapter 1. but as a reader, I should be cursing at the author. it gave me a hard time reading it. so, I was pissed but as a fellow writer I can understand. I would say, to check your para comments, I did as much as I could and try to fix them. don't just change themz review them and think it for yourself. I haven't read the enite story yet. The plot is good, but grammar isn't terrible, but a mess and made it harder to understand, making me reread paras simetimes thrice to comprehend the devine meaning hidden inside of them. So, focus on Style - I can let go of Grammar, but style should be good Grammar commas