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2021-07-20 23:10

I'm really excited to know how you got this idea! The way you written the synopsis is attractive. Looking forward to get more and more chapters with the best updating stability.

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Great story. Mc is our everyday teenager who get discouraged easily at first. Not to mention he isn't able to uphold himself to our societies standards. But he judges himself with those same standards. One day, when he once again found himself wondering if he is really a failure a elderly woman gets triggered. To his luck her work seems to be interesting, sending people isekai. Let's see if in this new life mc can find his sucess by becoming someone his new dragon parents will feel proud with or not. May be he will accept his defeat but anything be the outcome his journey is going to be fun. Writing Quality - It's great. I was kind of taken aback with the brackets but you get used to the writing style since it's engaging. I kind of didn't like mc's gibberish talking which didn't had a subtitle or something like that well he isn't going to be 3 years so it's a relief for me, it might be just a personal thing to. Story development - It's good so far there are some unexpected factors in the story that kept me invested in the story. The author knows how to give questions in each chapters to .ake reader anticipate for the next. Character Design - Let's talk about mc first, he has low self esteem in his first life. Consider each failure as ultimate. While next life he is hopeful, happy for new opportunity. It kind of threw me off guard when he was so ready to forget his past life but anyways I loved how he didn't got pressured by his drogon parents' expectations but found inspiration behind it. The granny really got me at edge. I don't hate her but I don't like her, I love her. She is judgemental, emotional but she is funny in a way. She cares for mc who does want to go back to his world in her own selfish way. In this story everyone seemed to have their motives even at the ocean in fight between the girl and the guy you just can't say the guy was 100% wrong for being angry. Updating stability - The author is generous 😁 don't worry. World background - It great author did some great work in this aspect. The categories between dragons, Mc's background in both the world it great. Will I recommend this story? Of course, it shows a new aspect of isekai. Keep up great work author. 👍

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