Poor grammar, lots of summaries, and time skips. Its a hard read, the grammar makes it hard, the story development is meh as well, most important aspects of his childhood are simply summarized. This is also one of those stories where the only smart ppl are mc and his women, he gives obvious advice to the faunus and they treat him like a genius, they also somehow listen to anything a 5-8 yo tells them without question so im not even going to bother reading further
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