Review Detail of Breno_Ranyere in Destiny Dating
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I'm enjoying what I'm seeing so far. The idea of a magic app that finds you your ideal match on another universe is really interesting. My only problem is that I feel like the focus is deviating a bit from said cool idea and kinda turning into a sorta generic magical kingdom fantasy love story. I would rather just follow Tyler and Dani around and try to find out why they are compatible and watch them play off each other than follow the whole "snake" sub-plot. I really enjoy the characters. They are not that deep, but they all have fun chemistry. The overall writing is very good. The pacing is nice and the wold is well described and very detailed. My favorite part was the "black paper" scene trying to explain the logic behind magic. It was simple yet complex at the same time. Looking foward to where this is going to go.
Destiny Dating
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Thank you for the insight! I appreciate the review. I did think that the split would get too boring without some kind of conflict/controversy. Romance is not my typical genre, so I defaulted to what is comfortable... I’ll keep this in mind as I go forward more and explain why Tyler is compatible with his matches on the app.
I am not an expert in romance myself, but in my case I like when both characters are enjoyable to follow when they are on their own and when they are together. Many romances fail to grab me because they focus on trying to make the characters only feel fun to follow when they are together and playing off old romance cliches.
shadowdrake27:Thank you for the insight! I appreciate the review. I did think that the split would get too boring without some kind of conflict/controversy. Romance is not my typical genre, so I defaulted to what is comfortable... I’ll keep this in mind as I go forward more and explain why Tyler is compatible with his matches on the app.
I’ll have to remember this... there will be times when the characters aren’t together. I also plan to have more love interests introduced that are very different. Perhaps while the MC is with one, the others are doing something else.
Breno_Ranyere:I am not an expert in romance myself, but in my case I like when both characters are enjoyable to follow when they are on their own and when they are together. Many romances fail to grab me because they focus on trying to make the characters only feel fun to follow when they are together and playing off old romance cliches.