I loved the start, it was a unique approach to reincarnating your MC. I get so sick of them meeting a god and having endless pointless questions or floating in a void and having a system be a sassy **** out of nowhere. There were a few dissapointing parts, like making the MC having 3 different power systems and abilities, and then nerfing them to merely 'useful' instead of OP. so the MC is still OP but not godlike OP as he should be with aura/chakra/reiatsu + tenseigan. next is the harem aspect and forcing it on him with the shadow clones going rogue. Didn't make much sense and was obviously forced. And a harem of more than 2 girls is always a bad choice because you cant devote the time needed to fully flesh out their character development. As it is all the MCs love interests seem inconsequential and shallow in this fic. Just there to prop Jaune up. But the main problem? I'm bored reading this. Nothing interesting happens. And the time something that could be interesting does, like the ambush? Still boring.
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