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Review Detail of HeavenlyHell in Phone App: Portable Armory

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The story seems nice with a uncommon system that I personally have not seen before. But unfortunately its a real pain to read due to bad editing and some grammar mistakes, Hopefully Author-san can get an editor to make it more smooth to read, until then thats the best I can say...

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Phone App: Portable Armory

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