The story has a cool premise and the system seems unique as well. The author seems to have done a lot of research regarding guns and the like, so good job, author! One thing I have to say though is that the story needs some proofreading and some extra details. The plot seems to go a bit too fast; it would be better if it was slowed down a bit. Good luck author! :)
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