Review Detail of lynerparel in Phone App: Portable Armory
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This story has a pretty good system, that I'm surprised that no one else has thought of it. The story is like most system stories, which is cool and all. But the thing that makes me want to continue reading this is the system. I haven't read any system stories as of late, and this might be able to scratch my itch. Thanks, author for sharing your story.
Phone App: Portable Armory
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_MASTER_:It probably wasn't much around because of the 'gender- bender's tag. You'd not be surprised I found same novel without the gender bender tag and people seem to like it.
Well I would prefer non system, but if it was going to be a system maybe something like: - Relaxing not much action or exploring (If there was I would like it to be relatively quick). - I would like if the MC would have to do experiments to understand or figure out something. <- The system doesn't help him figure it out. The MC must use his brain. - Good punctuation (relatively good). Don't care too much about spelling errors. - Don't care much about system type, but I would prefer the system not to talk.
lynerparel:What kind of system novel are you looking for.
If you are ok with slice of life, then try 'the rise of otaku' and the original 'part-time star, full time dad' the second one it's not completely what you asked but its a great one
Omnidoa:Well I would prefer non system, but if it was going to be a system maybe something like: - Relaxing not much action or exploring (If there was I would like it to be relatively quick). - I would like if the MC would have to do experiments to understand or figure out something. <- The system doesn't help him figure it out. The MC must use his brain. - Good punctuation (relatively good). Don't care too much about spelling errors. - Don't care much about system type, but I would prefer the system not to talk.
Is the second one harem? I'll check it out either way to find out, but I would still like to know :)! Also, I'll definitely look at the first one
Sangabriel:If you are ok with slice of life, then try 'the rise of otaku' and the original 'part-time star, full time dad' the second one it's not completely what you asked but its a great one
Yep, an harem, the author said the harem will be of 3-4 members, we know of 3 already atleast, it's full of fluff thing, a bit of perv teasing from the MC and author and some action. The first one, people say it's repetitive because the patron of the MC is almost all the time the same, but they dont get that the guy is an otaku, one that never get out of his house, he's growing out of it, but his nature it's not something so easy to change. The best of both it's the nonstandar system.
Omnidoa:Is the second one harem? I'll check it out either way to find out, but I would still like to know :)! Also, I'll definitely look at the first one
It's been a while since I last read this, and I can't remembsr much but I'm pretty sure this isn't a fake review. At the time I read it and this were my thoughts at the time, if you have a different opinion good for you.
Shadow_Gamer1:I call fake review,look how bad that intro is,who would choose to read this rubbish after that
Sangabriel:If you are ok with slice of life, then try 'the rise of otaku' and the original 'part-time star, full time dad' the second one it's not completely what you asked but its a great one
lynerparel:It's been a while since I last read this, and I can't remembsr much but I'm pretty sure this isn't a fake review. At the time I read it and this were my thoughts at the time, if you have a different opinion good for you.