Review Detail of HotCheeto in Tartarus

It’s really hard to explain how bad this is... The story is bland and boring, protagonist is so generic it hurts my brain to read what he say’s and does. Don’t get me started on the enemies here. It’s like watching a cartoon repeat every 10 minutes to make it worse the fighting is stupid and so is the background story. To top it all up the grammar and wording is straight up trash. A 1st grader can write better then this stuff man. This could have been a way better story if only they actually had an editor and proper translator. When I read the description it sounded really good. After 10 seconds of actually reading I wanted to throw up from it 🤮