Review Detail of Cinnamon_Pretzel in Cultivation Clicker

Hello! I found this prompt super interesting and having read Cultivation Chat Room, I found this concept of cultivating through a clicker game really cool! There's only 2 chapters so far but your story's got me really hooked. Aside from a few spelling/pronunciation mistakes, your writing is great overall. I'm looking forward to how the plot progresses and how our MC develops! Good luck!