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Sesshomaru_
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I can get what everyone was saying about the character dodging romance between Grayfia and Serafall but romance is not in the tags so I was not expecting anything good or sub-par in this field. The mc being beta is hard to understand as I cant see why but again that is most likely coming from the people thinking giving your male friend comfort or a shoulder to cry on is gay. Would I have liked to see better romance most definitely but at the end of the day it was still a decent read without it. Seeing the author doesn't seem to do well with romance it probably would've made the story worse if he tried to add more.

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Eight_Lord
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The guy didn't even bother to give the original Satans a personality, they're just bags of meat to make the MC look more decent, we don't even see their interactions outside that MC's fight with the descendant of Beelzebub. And then there's Grayfia's OCness, her beating the future Satan? out of character right here, she wouldn't raise her hand to any descendants of Lucifer during her reign, but the author thinks it's funny for whatever fucking reason. And then there's Malebranche, all we have is the Canon Control C + Control V, not even to explore that properly he thought. The explanation of the MC's origin is stupid, because (in addition to not making sense) it makes him less of a person, and more of an artificial being, were we supposed to find this interesting? swear? Who likes to see that the MC is nothing more than an experiment? And it doesn't do anything with Rizevim, the guy who doesn't care about anything, raising a "son" that way, why would he do it? Rizevim doesn't care about anything in the end, whether the MC comes from a Goddess or not doesn't matter to him, and we see it right here, since Rizevim doesn't care about the MC's existence. Oh, and don't we forget the resolution of the final chapter, the MC leaving his name as a trophy for the Anti Satans? man, and everyone warned what the fuck that would be, and he went there and made it, we wanted a leader for the new hell, like Doctor Doom is for Lativeria, but no, the MC is incompetent even to be a leader, why make him one Lucifer then? make him a random member of the 72 pillars then, since he has no relevance as Satan.

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