It is a excellent storyline with a well developed main character, i can't wait to see how you will develop the story as you come near the canon timeline.
GreatSage_Master1
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LIKEWell developed Main Character, pfft, where? (he doesn't even have a personality, besides being "lazy"), the MC doesn't even appear right in the story (60 years at war, and he doesn't do anything), Sirczhes seems to be more MC than Razevan, not including that the MC doesn't causes NO long-term canon change, he leaves his title (which he says he's proud of) as a trophy for the Rebels.