Writing quality 3/5. There are some issues here mostly grammar with few spelling mistakes. Based on the cadence of the dialogue I’m guessing the author isn’t a native English speaker, or the novel is translated by a machine. Stability of updating 4/5. Enough said. Story development 4/5. I liked the story, the premise is a little weird and it’s kind of choppy in the beginning but it evens out later on. Character design 2/5. I never really felt like the character actually was Sephiroth or really any person at all. The mc is kind of bland and almost machine like whereas Sephiroth had drive and was a strong character in final fantasy. World background 3/5. I mean the author didn’t build MHA but it’s a really good world so for the author having done 0 work for this category I felt a 3/5 was fair. Overall 3.2/5 not a bad find.
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