Review Detail of NotUse in Two Worlds, One Hero

Thanks a lot. your review made my day. I was doubting my style when I started writing it. should I keep using the first-person perspective or third-person which would give me a new level of freedom with the later arcs. but for now, I will keep sticking with the first person. thanks again. and I hope you like the later chapters : ))

I write with both styles. but this time I felt hesitant. at first, I was sure since I was trying to write for fun, something like the daily life of the MC. but after I finished the world-building sitting. I fell in a dilemma since I know when I reach half the story I would need to leave the MC perspective to tell the other side of the story and showing the grand world. but anyways, I will leave tomorrow problems to tomorrow me :D