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juanultimopoder
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The author didnt make a very bad story its just that its really made to annoy people, the mc becomes a slave by his own will, the system is against him, his mother is a slut, his family has been hiding things from him and treating him like a pet to be raised and then released to the wild after growing up( because honestly in the supernatural world those that have no knowlege of how to defend themselves are just cattle for the strong), its really a wonder in how the mc could have died to the fallens and his parents didnt care a bit, or how he basically became a slave and his parents didnt warn him of the dangers, its really a wonder how he had a brother but he never got to know even a bit of him, or how he knew about the dificulty of the world and just waited for a system, i believe it sucks to be the mc and he doesnt really have a consistent personality, plus the story has a lot of things that can make it unpopular.

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Culture_Lover
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concuerdo contigo bro, el sistema de cards fue una muy buena idea, la personalidad del MC en los primeros capítulos (aparte de las decisiones tontas) fue buena, pero la tontería de la "herencia" y la historia de sus padres fue algo que creo no necesitaba el fanfic, toda una lástima