I like the story honestly, 10/10. But the addition of complicated background for the MC in the later chapter is a big let down for me. I like how he comes from a normal family more. Also, the story about the jungle king is really unnecessary. I don't say the jungle king bloodline unnecessary, but the unnecessary part is the story about the bloodline, The story about the jungle king. Okay, it needed to explain the bloodline, but could you make it less exaggerated? Then comes the parents complicated backgrounds. I think the one from mother side is enough if you make the jungle king part simple enough and less exaggerated. But again, you add about father complicated side with "strange" Sona's sport's channel's commentator-like reaction, with long story explanation. I don't know, but it feels strange. Well, it's just my opinion and there are chapters ahead that I haven't read yet. So I hope it doesn't degenerate and actually much better because I like the previous chapters of this story....
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