Review Detail of YouthGod in Deleted Novel
Review detail
Hahahahaha what the heck... I thought I can stomach the mc for a little bit but I can't really go on... he is so stupi.. " ok my powers is bla bla bla..." "I am the cool guy bla bla bla..." "You are like this bla bla bla.... ugh really?
Deleted Novel
Swatdude64
Liked by 6 people
LIKEReplies5
Swatdude64:Wow it's almost like it's stated multiple times that the first few chapters are worse than the rest because it's separated by several months.
It's fine. In my opinion he gets better later on, but that may be creator's bias. Either way the point of this isn't actually to be mind blowing good or anything, it's to build experience. It just so happens some people also like it. Heck, I had written the first chapters with the intention of never uploading it.
YouthGod:really? J did not know because its hard to stomach the mc... no offense I mean really the mc
I actually continued it when you say that it becomes better on the ltter chapters and I agree with it.... I read it and find it actually funny. and the irritating parts are becoming less... so thanks for writting I guess?
Swatdude64:It's fine. In my opinion he gets better later on, but that may be creator's bias. Either way the point of this isn't actually to be mind blowing good or anything, it's to build experience. It just so happens some people also like it. Heck, I had written the first chapters with the intention of never uploading it.
And thank you for being reasonable and having an actually understandable complaint that makes me think to make sure I don't repeat those mistakes,
YouthGod:I actually continued it when you say that it becomes better on the ltter chapters and I agree with it.... I read it and find it actually funny. and the irritating parts are becoming less... so thanks for writting I guess?