Review Detail of Supreme_Devil in Deleted Novel

Feel free to interpret this opinion however you guys want, but take it with a grain of salt because thirty minutes before posting this he said he hasn't even read it. Yet thirty minutes later he claims he read 85788 words (AKA as long as the first Harry Potter book) within that time frame, and writes a review using only things he could have read within the first two chapters, and ignores any changes made past the second chapter Like how every quest after chapter 4 no longer has punishments, yet this was never mentioned. Or how I directly changed Issei's personality to not be obsessed with boobs, but this is never mentioned. Not sure if he's actually lying or not, based on this, but oh well.

Yeap I have no guilt.

if anyone falls for it and bails on the novel after you've just admitted you lied, I'm not even gonna be mad at you because they'd be idiots anyways.

Good point, but you forgot that dxd is a fck up supernatural, probably Michael messed with god's system in a way for they will not fall as like " to reward god's followers we will make them angels under us ", but its still slavery because they can't disobey the owner of brave saint system, the most fck up thing about their system (like the devils) that no matter what they will do (reincarnators) they will never let them become a member of the seraphs (same thing with the Senate of the devils), that my second point to show you that they don't have a voice to change things is, you know the creator of the all the systems (technically) is Ajuka and he is known for being a super genius so why he didn't make a whole different system instead of having a parasite relationship with the master that either they obey or they will be hunt doing like an animal for sport,he change them permanently from their races you see the hypocrisy in this??

Yes I am an idiot but at least I have a brain that shows me the difference between being an employee that works with his own will and can withdraws any time he want and a slave that will never have a will, one a slave always a slave unless there was a revolution against the slaves and of course they can't withdraws unless they get their freedom, right??

Slaves*

I read it when I was 13 (3 years ago), I didn't actually think of whats happening behind the scenes and every time I read a paragraph about something happening I always laugh after 9 volumes I got bored so I went to read other novels ( I didn't know that fanfics exists in that time) after gaining a little knowledge about how fck up the novels world can be ( xianxian) I backed to read it (dxd) again only to notice how fk up it was so I didn't read it anymore and went to something else.

I literally didn't call you an idiot, I called anyone who listens to your review an idiot, since it's been proven a lie. As for the whole 'slavery' thing. He has his own will, she lets him do as he pleases, he disobeys orders multiple times and guess what? NEVER PUNISHED. As for the never leaving thing, guess what? He doesn't want to because he isn't mistreated, so its a useless point. Why cry about not having an option you'll never need anyways, at least in this case.

So slavery is good in your book?? I don't mean the novel I mean your morals, you know a wise man said one time that you write about the things you wish to have, I didn't know that having slavery fetishes is a good thing in both sides. Nasty😳😳.

That is not changing anything Author you made what could have been a bad ass character into a lame , typical , boring idiot slave. The only creative thing you did in this novel is that you made him into sona ***** instead of Rias Bitch. Seriously I have to salute you Author after getting so many people saying they don’t like him being slave you still think you did right thing . I know a idiot when I see one . So I am dropping this **** right here right now with 1 star rating

You say that, but I have dozens of more people not calling me childish insults, so something tells me the people I'm upsetting aren't the smartest bunch

Author don’t try to argue with every one like that they are people who clearly hate the very idea of High school DxD and just came here to rant and people like that will just keep going to no end They just want attention and you are giving it to them In the end you are the only one losing your mind

Regard brave saint program is same as slavery is false. Please try to read dxd side story (about mc meet gasper from the future). There was information that irina became higher up of heaven faction because must to fill absence predeccesor after 666 get sealed to the point exhausted until death.

Give this a man a salute!!! He stood against the beast without any fear, the feminist Bitch.

I don’t know how others do, but there are two things that prevent me from reading your fan fiction: 1 is there Issei 2 System ---> Reward branch ----> Failure to die (Here is such a system) Google translate

Okay well clearly you've only read the bad stuff because I've said this before, dozens of times. I removed the punishments after hundreds of people kept *****ing about them. And also Issei is a different character than in the original, as he isn't obsessed with boobs.

Another author who deletes reviews

I kinda agree with this, dxd is basically fan service with good plot and a bad mc.

Umm I didn't read the last two sentences bc I didn't seen them properly, blame the lake of sleeping, anyways, I will give an example to show you how big of an idiot you are to say that, do know about YouTube channel called "five minutes craft'?? Or did you know about the conspiracy theories about the "aliens are here for us" or "the government is brainwashing all the people ". you see not all people are insecure 14 years old teenagers looking for attention, they have something you don't have, something every damn person with an ego have, its called common sense. We all know that Japan is known with its fk up entertainment politics, if they can have a kid doing P0rn legally, god knows what they can do in lettering , and sure they didn't fail us, as it was shown in some novels like dxd, witch in you can have a slavery (aka peerages) introduced as good thing for you, its your typical [ ah look the mc is dead!! Rias : don't worry I will reincarnate him as my peerage member (slave) so he can serve me till the end of his life after several times of trying to seduce him (witch I didn't need to) and watching get killed to get this opportunity]. My whole point is, is watching dxd is bad? No. Do the people that do watched or read the novel are bad? No. Defending the idea behind peerages is a bad deed?? Fvck yeah it is!! Simply I don't like this fanfic bc if slavery came back again by idk Hitler Jr, those people that are having an idm attitude toward this in what is writing they would not mind this in reality. And pls don't pull out the crap of this being just a fanfic, the history has proven that the pen (virtual in this case) is stronger than the sword, and with how ridiculously the society works I would not be surprised if a school shooting starts with a kid depressed from having his favorite entertainment canceled/stopped.

But he is still present in your fanfiction