Review Detail of herbert in Deleted Novel

**: After reading some of the other reviews, I have come across a common mistake people commit when reading fan-fics. Many reviewers seem to think that if the fan-fic doesn’t exactly meet their needs, then it deserves less stars. They think that their words and preferences should dictate the direction the story should go, mostly pointing out things they don’t like so they complain about it. It’s pretty annoying, like, if you don’t have anything constructive to say, don’t say anything at all. Rant ended.